Knucklehead vs. Pimp Daddy Payne {Knucklehead wins}

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

bleak aka Pimp Daddy Payne..?

U wack as fuck - ANYBODY could body bleak w/ a written, dude
So don't ever get to thinkin' you're Big, Daddy.. 'cus no one needs your help to piss on you
Asked for proof ur not a fat faggot - coulda been redeemed w/ a retort
U can go post another 28 pics of dimebags.. & u still won't have an Ounce of respect here
B2B, Ultimate Writer, & now? ur oppurtunities ain't pan out in the past, or lately
U never make it past a Window, Payne.. u just sit by one & write love letters to Slim Shady

the punch/flip on all these 3 was good -creative and/or harsh - and was what made them quotable rather than the wp itself. The punch/wp connection wasn't strong enough on the glass half full one for me. Wolverine was cool/OK but didn't feel like quoting it.

Originally Posted by bleak

sup

Let me at em... He's rattled, I got no clue why this whore bothers.
I now present the Roast of Knuck- brought to you by Sn00p and his forefathers
creative way to put a "you lost to" line, but it just didn't come off very harsh to me
He beat you and trumps ya status. Truly, it's not that ur Jew.
You should feel like Nate Dogg, the way you're always a notch under Sn00p
Sn00p dogg lines are pretty done on Sn00p... iunno if you meant to but you perhaps could have incorporated a nameflip on me with it - Nate - although those are done on ME, lol... anyway, the personal was there but the wp is pretty done
You give off creeper vibes. You can't pull bitches when you're lame as fuck.
My dude, ya thirstier than Mal is. But chicks feel THAT when your name comes up.
good, original wp far as I know..
See, I roll deep, n hold heat. Matchin up? my dawgs come round for clean ups.
Come pair'd as in 2 of ya, n I'll Split any of THOSE he might have found between us.
almost. wording's not quite right - should be split any comparisons, not split any compared... cool idea, set up was good
Alpaca fat gun that'll blast ya. With my Tali's, n 70 virgins I can call up.
Now WATCH 'as a llama lake him,' and send him to the bottom w/o the mercy of Allah.
aha yea you know I thought this was funny bad... it's actually not forced sound-wise at all, it's just that it's a reach conceptually - using 'lake' as a verb... also thought alpaca/I'll pack a was corny... less can be more

Keep posting. You got some bugs to work out but you've got a good swag/flow and can be creative.


Knuck had the more polished verse here. His lines that I liked I just liked... it wasn't a matter of liking an element of them, "but..." as it was with a couple of Bleak's. Coo battle

v/ Knuck