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Old 11-04-2014, 09:57 AM   #1
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Killing you off by swinging a sword with more individual torque than an infinite source of physical force.
Your continuous struggle with the simplest thoughts is an unbearable spectacle.
I’m the G.O.A.T. with the acronym serial, and I’m the 7.15.1.20 with the alphanumerical.

first line was vicious. i like the word torque.

last was clever once i caught it. lol i like how you're always thinking outside the box.

You act as a receptacle for gang banging homosexuals – you carry more semen in your gastrointestinal tract than a hundred men carry in their testicular sacs.
Not that there’s anything wrong with that.

lmao. seinfeld references on point. just great. i think the second time was a bit overkill, but others might find the repetition dope.

I’m extraordinary, generate hype like a celebrity scandal, you’re merely average like a representative sample.

ahh. love stats rhymes.

the entire comparative segment (i.e., pat on the head/hemorrhage trauma) was pretty dope. a couple i didnt like were the Obama and Bahamas lines. infrared saunas was my favorite though. along with 15th century explorer, which got a laugh out of me.

i could probably read 30 of these. god knows I've read at least 11.

thanks as always zyg


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