Creepshow vs wait. - OPEN FOR VOTES - CREEPSHOW WINS

Packed Graves · 11-04-2014, 08:09 AM

Freak show, CSI, TLC, your bars came off a little choppy or rushed. Feel you could have had some haymakers with the nameplays just don't think you capitalized. Not a bad verse but decent showing.

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Can't wait was nice, cobra, Silver thread, recognize a G, not a bad verse good mix of nameplays & current events. The recognize a G line was probably LOTB. Not much to critique really except wording could use a little help.

CreepShow

11-04-2014, 08:09 AM	#8
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Freak show, CSI, TLC, your bars came off a little choppy or rushed. Feel you could have had some haymakers with the nameplays just don't think you capitalized. Not a bad verse but decent showing. Vs Can't wait was nice, cobra, Silver thread, recognize a G, not a bad verse good mix of nameplays & current events. The recognize a G line was probably LOTB. Not much to critique really except wording could use a little help. CreepShow __________________ back

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