No Country for Rode Men vs Loose Booty - LOOSE WINS

Packed Graves · 11-03-2014, 10:51 PM

Opener was fire, current was decent flip, pop flys, x wing hahahaha, I liked this verse wording was clean & creative aspects. One of the better verses in the tournament so far. The misses weren't bad came off as light jabs he punches where nice though with 2 haymakers.

Vs

Muffs post, booty call, loose change, footloose, you had some nice bars as well definitely a good verse here. Just some of your misses were bad & kind of hindered your verse.

Better consistency & overall verse = first guy

11-03-2014, 10:51 PM	#1
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	Opener was fire, current was decent flip, pop flys, x wing hahahaha, I liked this verse wording was clean & creative aspects. One of the better verses in the tournament so far. The misses weren't bad came off as light jabs he punches where nice though with 2 haymakers. Vs Muffs post, booty call, loose change, footloose, you had some nice bars as well definitely a good verse here. Just some of your misses were bad & kind of hindered your verse. Better consistency & overall verse = first guy __________________ back

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