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Old 10-28-2014, 04:40 PM   #1
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Malachi, this was kind of simple compared to some of your other stuff. The beginning was the problem: The "decline" rhymes were thin, and you used a ketchup line right at the start that kind of ruined the whole thing. The content and rhymes improved a little as they went on, but it didn't seem as interesting or unique as some of the other stuff you've posted lately.
The ketchup line was corny huh lool sounded fire when I thought of it at first
But thanks for the feed bruh
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