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10-26-2014, 05:51 PM
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SYRACUSE
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,031
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Liked Adonis and was a cool coherent little story but thought it was shaky at critical moments. Love Greek folklore and all that so enjoyed it a lot. No idea what solstice was going for but was well written. I think the delivery soul brought edges it for him here whereas if Adonis added a twist I probably would've leaned to his verse as champion
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