WK4 : Soulstice(1-1) vs. Adonis(1-0) -- Soulstice Wins Flawless

[PancakeBrah]

Adonis-

I don't know about this. It was smooth, flow/rhythm wise. The rhymes were obviously pretty sparce and simplistic. I guess you decided to relate to the topic thematically, metaphorically or something. Whatever the connection is it's pretty tangential. Seems like you wanted to write something epic, topic be damned. So you did, and it was damned. Verse was fine for a standalone verse. Non-descript lore type thing. Which is something I don't particularly like. No great shakes here.

Soulstice-

Really had no idea what you were talking about. The writing was leagues better than your opponents, though. Sometimes you read a little too dense and rhyme focused for my tastes but the talent is evident. Some of the descriptors and turns of phrase were very good here. I especially enjoyed the first two lines and the eulogy lines. You're very good. Just sort of wish you'd give SOME time to give a few concrete explanations of your point as opposed to 100% description and feeling, if that makes sense. Whatever.

Both were sideways to the topic as far as I can tell. Soulstice outwrote his opponent easily.

v/soulstice