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10-20-2014, 04:57 PM
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ghost in the matrix
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i got muff taking this with a bit more personal punch. i liked the use of a past name play instead of all the played cert/sert plays lately and it had humerous imagery wit it so that was a bonus.
cert's was nice but felt kinda generic this week. for the name play itself it was nicely done but gunplay type bars have been done to death v muff
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