Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. Muff [BROKE LESNAR Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-08-2014, 09:06 AM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

BROKE LESNAR · 10-08-2014, 09:37 AM

Check.

El Muffin · 10-08-2014, 10:41 AM

TARGET ACQUIRED

BROKE LESNAR · 10-12-2014, 02:42 PM

@Attack of the Muff @murda sho

ur the most predictable wild card, u should reverse gears n skip the dejection
when i draw two this ain't uno attack, its a clip for u n the bitch u pm'ed for suggestions

El Muffin · 10-12-2014, 02:53 PM

Both our shits running across the page. Fk the excessive abbrv lol gl

Ur fkn named after a wrestler! Obviously your meant to choke
But if you see Lesnar executin a F5' hes refreshin this match to see if he gets a vote

Packed Graves · 10-12-2014, 08:41 PM

I personally don't understand @BROKE LESNAR & to me muff didn't attack his opponent.
So someone please enlighten me.

El Muffin · 10-12-2014, 08:52 PM

Uno and Uno Attack are card games. Draw 2, Reverse, Skip, Wild Card, are processes within said games.

Brock lesnar special move is the f5. In the WWE, Brock Lesnar would finish the match with the f5 manuever. f5 is the refresh function on the keyboard.

F5 = the refresh function

I speculated that he sits itt spamming refresh to see if he gets a vote

Hows that not attacking

This is weird as fuck. Ill jus hav to w8 for the ppl who knew wtf I was saying.

This is in response to pg not kin

Kin · 10-12-2014, 09:26 PM

This wasnt as dope as i thought it would be...
Broke...pretty solid wit the wordplay but strongest part was the personal in this...not as creative as you normally get

Muff....wasnt diggin u referring his name as the wrestler...thats the easy way out..as far as the f5 refresh shit...ok.. but if checking for votes was a bad thing it woulda been harder...not as creative as u bring it normally either...

Gotta side with the personal on this cuz i feel it actually made a impact

Vote...two scope Broke

Blanco Bishop · 10-13-2014, 09:03 AM

Well...broke was definately more aggressive.
Had to google the uno stuff but it all ties in well.

Muff had a good wp. My only problem with it is that it didnt come off as harsh. For some reason or other it came off statementish.

Soooooo imma have to go with broke

V broke

Certain · 10-14-2014, 01:27 AM

BROKE LESNAR: This was good as a concept but labored in execution. The final clause took way too long to deliver. It was a personal, but the personal didn't connect with me until your opponent was an idiot and confirmed that you were correct in your assertion. Also, @Meth's a bitch.

Attack of the Muff: This was good as a concept but labored in execution. On one hand, I'm guessing someone has used an F5 line against BROKE LESNAR if he's been using that name long enough. But I haven't seen it and did a cursory search for such lines and didn't find one. This landed with more impact to me despite being less personal.

Vote: Attack of the Muff

El Muffin · 10-14-2014, 09:38 AM

Up 4 votes.

2-1

Get them votes in guys

We r slacking as a whole this wk

YDK · 10-14-2014, 09:54 PM

I honestly loved the f5-refresh concept but the punch itself set up and idea of checking for votes was cliche considering your the one constantly stating you're waiting for votes muff lol
broke had a solid wp and decent punch that coulda lost if muffs was a bit more harsh

Gotta vote broke here

Kill Spree · 10-15-2014, 12:43 PM

Brokers concept was cool but seemed choppy with the personal. I liked muffs allot more although I think I've seen the f5 concept before. So that being said I'm voting for muff here

Red Soldier · 10-15-2014, 04:47 PM

Vote/Muff. I would have voted for Broke but it seemed alil stretched or too wordy of a punch. Muffs could have been a tad bit better too but overall if I had to pick who had the better execution I'd go w/ muff.

Tic · 10-15-2014, 05:15 PM

Muff's didn't do it for me. Broke's was alright, but worded weirdly. Gotta go with Broke here though.

V/ Broke

Destroyer · 10-15-2014, 07:43 PM

didn't love either but didn't really feel muffs punch as a punch

v/BL

Unfukwitable · 10-16-2014, 07:14 AM

was a close call but one had more of a sting imo... v/BL

10-08-2014, 09:06 AM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Championship Match: BROKE LESNAR vs. Muff [BROKE LESNAR Wins] Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST

10-08-2014, 10:41 AM	#3
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	TARGET ACQUIRED __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-12-2014, 02:53 PM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Both our shits running across the page. Fk the excessive abbrv lol gl Ur fkn named after a wrestler! Obviously your meant to choke But if you see Lesnar executin a F5' hes refreshin this match to see if he gets a vote __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 10-12-2014 at 03:08 PM.

10-12-2014, 08:41 PM	#6
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	I personally don't understand @BROKE LESNAR & to me muff didn't attack his opponent. So someone please enlighten me. __________________ back

10-12-2014, 08:52 PM	#7
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Uno and Uno Attack are card games. Draw 2, Reverse, Skip, Wild Card, are processes within said games. Brock lesnar special move is the f5. In the WWE, Brock Lesnar would finish the match with the f5 manuever. f5 is the refresh function on the keyboard. F5 = the refresh function I speculated that he sits itt spamming refresh to see if he gets a vote Hows that not attacking This is weird as fuck. Ill jus hav to w8 for the ppl who knew wtf I was saying. This is in response to pg not kin __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 10-13-2014 at 12:52 AM.

10-08-2014, 09:37 AM	#2
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Check.

10-12-2014, 02:42 PM	#4
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	@Attack of the Muff @murda sho ur the most predictable wild card, u should reverse gears n skip the dejection when i draw two this ain't uno attack, its a clip for u n the bitch u pm'ed for suggestions

10-12-2014, 09:26 PM	#8
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	This wasnt as dope as i thought it would be... Broke...pretty solid wit the wordplay but strongest part was the personal in this...not as creative as you normally get Muff....wasnt diggin u referring his name as the wrestler...thats the easy way out..as far as the f5 refresh shit...ok.. but if checking for votes was a bad thing it woulda been harder...not as creative as u bring it normally either... Gotta side with the personal on this cuz i feel it actually made a impact Vote...two scope Broke

10-13-2014, 09:03 AM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Well...broke was definately more aggressive. Had to google the uno stuff but it all ties in well. Muff had a good wp. My only problem with it is that it didnt come off as harsh. For some reason or other it came off statementish. Soooooo imma have to go with broke V broke

10-14-2014, 01:27 AM	#10
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	BROKE LESNAR: This was good as a concept but labored in execution. The final clause took way too long to deliver. It was a personal, but the personal didn't connect with me until your opponent was an idiot and confirmed that you were correct in your assertion. Also, @Meth's a bitch. Attack of the Muff: This was good as a concept but labored in execution. On one hand, I'm guessing someone has used an F5 line against BROKE LESNAR if he's been using that name long enough. But I haven't seen it and did a cursory search for such lines and didn't find one. This landed with more impact to me despite being less personal. Vote: Attack of the Muff __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-14-2014, 09:38 AM	#11
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Up 4 votes. 2-1 Get them votes in guys We r slacking as a whole this wk __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-14-2014, 09:54 PM	#12
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	I honestly loved the f5-refresh concept but the punch itself set up and idea of checking for votes was cliche considering your the one constantly stating you're waiting for votes muff lol broke had a solid wp and decent punch that coulda lost if muffs was a bit more harsh Gotta vote broke here __________________

10-15-2014, 12:43 PM	#13
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Brokers concept was cool but seemed choppy with the personal. I liked muffs allot more although I think I've seen the f5 concept before. So that being said I'm voting for muff here

10-15-2014, 04:47 PM	#14
Red Soldier T.Guerrero Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 96 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 0	Vote/Muff. I would have voted for Broke but it seemed alil stretched or too wordy of a punch. Muffs could have been a tad bit better too but overall if I had to pick who had the better execution I'd go w/ muff.

10-15-2014, 05:15 PM	#15
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	Muff's didn't do it for me. Broke's was alright, but worded weirdly. Gotta go with Broke here though. V/ Broke

10-16-2014, 07:14 AM	#17
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	was a close call but one had more of a sting imo... v/BL __________________ WICKeD

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