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10-04-2014, 08:51 PM
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the muzzle
You had a great verse in the awol this week.
Really insightful and well written. Good job bro. Fuck bags. |
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10-04-2014, 09:01 PM
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Greed was looki ng good
Then sumthing happened It went paragraph styke for two lines Then sum over the top internal rhyme lol
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10-04-2014, 09:03 PM
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What u can hate on is the fact greed is prolly gonna loose. @Greed Wtf man? |
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10-04-2014, 09:05 PM
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lol tag game is on point.
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10-04-2014, 09:26 PM
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Do you honestly think Muzzle's verse was good or are having a giggle right now?
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10-04-2014, 09:30 PM
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Muzzle was rhyming in parables like sun tsu on fkn peyote
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10-05-2014, 12:57 PM
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It was ok. Better than greed. |
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10-05-2014, 01:28 PM
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I used to read ESPN magazine when I shit...Now I chat with you guys
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10-05-2014, 02:38 PM
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Honestly, I care what you guys think as writers. But, I don't care what you think of me.
Thank you Innovator for liking my verse. It was a little over the top in the straying and hard to put 1 + 2 together. I'll work on advice I received from Adonis. The thing that strikes me as strange is, its AOWL, meaning ARTistic integrity. However, I will attempt to make my shit more readable and less drawn out. I refused to write in the format of: (16 syllables) / 16 syllables / 16 syllables / 16 syllables and make words slightly rhyme at the end of each quarter note. In battle, I'd take time to do that... but in AOWL, look at ex-champ Frank. Does he write to a format? Hell no, he just makes it fuckin awesome and thats it.
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10-05-2014, 03:06 PM
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Lines I found in my phones notepad. Put stuff around it to create the theme of contemplation.
Ya'll gay for stories. I was not about to write that much. |
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10-05-2014, 03:27 PM
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o |
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10-05-2014, 03:43 PM
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My nig greed was like
Sweat in my pores..poseidon on the ocean floor close to earths core wielding a sword like gimme some moar Killin it Yall cantfuk with greed Hes like canibus no notebook
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10-05-2014, 04:04 PM
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Lol joins a topical league.
But hates writing stories. |
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IMO, you'd be better with battles.
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10-05-2014, 05:55 PM
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Stfu muzzle.
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