Week 1: NYCSPITZ vs. Objective [NYCSPITZ wins, 9-1.]

[PancakeBrah]

NYCSPITZ-

Pretty cool. Your strength is definitely your knack for storytelling in a text verse style. Good writing throughout, especially in the first and last sections. Not much to say. A strong verse with a Frank-eque finish.

Objective-

This was alright. The '-orm' rhymes definitely got a bit redundant in the middle of this verse. Overall solid, just didn't really wow me or anything. Some good lines, no glaring mistakes. Could've used a bit more, I think?

There's less to say when the verses aren't bad like some of other battles I've trudged through. There was nothing 'wrong' with Objective's verse at all, it was kind of just there, though. NYC didn't have his best verse, but it was good and had a bit more interest in it. Solid battle here.

v/NYC