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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: on the couch
Posts: 842
Battle Record: 2-6
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I already lost, but I'm gonna vote anyways.
Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin? I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin! (1010) -- this got me laughin I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right ...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes! (8/10) over all good lines He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked! (3/10) You said "he" and then "you" in the same line. Bad English. The 2nd line was ok. That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore! (10/10) this was a good punch line, set the stage /w line 1 & line 2 killed it. Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me (2/10) 1st line was decent, but the 3rd one kind of went off topic. 35 vs ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs (6/10) 1st line was dope, second line followed it up nicely… but lack of rhymes dropped it from 10/10 to 6/10. enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win (2/10) didn't rhyme, and I'm sure "easy win" has been over-used seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound (7/10) these were good lines, only reason I dropped it from a 10 to a 7 is because Windu dropped some tight lines. Close battles are fun to read. so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in (4/10) I couldn't see why you'd take his outfit if he's a cross dresser, but it rhymed and the second line earned you the 4 points. lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim (10/10) Excellent closer -- best line that you dropped. 29 Close one. /V Profit |
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