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09-24-2014, 07:13 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
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Blanco Bishop: I liked this quite a bit. The concept was sharp and personal. But you didn't quite set it up right with "classic battles." You could have said, "I use text veterans as measuring sticks, you ask them how they do that." The that/that rhyme was bad, though.
MKG: This could be interpreted as a feed, though I don't mind it for that. But this is way too direct and not very clever. Vote: Blanco Bishop
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