Signs Of A Storm

Kin · 09-17-2014, 04:29 PM

best lines for me...
Or something rather, shatter teeth and invest in vulgar
threats that'll have every species impressed and bolder.

that was worded nice... as far as the content I was a lil' lost...tha whole Bee thing I get the species part you were tryna play wit' juz thought it was too abstract But as far as a story you can keep it movin' that way..

this was aight...nothin' mind blowin' but the first I checked from you...would like to see somethin a lil' more down to earth next time...maybe spice up the rhyme scheme a lil'

HoLLa

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09-17-2014, 04:29 PM	#6
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	best lines for me... Or something rather, shatter teeth and invest in vulgar threats that'll have every species impressed and bolder. that was worded nice... as far as the content I was a lil' lost...tha whole Bee thing I get the species part you were tryna play wit' juz thought it was too abstract But as far as a story you can keep it movin' that way.. this was aight...nothin' mind blowin' but the first I checked from you...would like to see somethin a lil' more down to earth next time...maybe spice up the rhyme scheme a lil' HoLLa