Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Vault > Archives > The Netcees archive > Netcees Newbie Tournament VII

User Tag List

Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 09-13-2014, 05:31 PM   #1
Pharaohs Army
Banned
 
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14



Rep Power: 0
Pharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Touche Guerrero View Post
You're trash at text. Nothing else need be said.
Anyone who knows anything about writing or rap would know that my verse was very good.

So apparently a lot of people here don't know about writing or rap.

I'm not bothered. I'm very comfortable with what I wrote here. Might record it too.

I actually "tried" on dis one. In some past things I didn't put in effort, or tried to be goofy...I feel like that "history" has worked against me. People who are judging should read the actual recent thing in front of them, not base things on rep or "past wackness".

To say nothing of the 90-10 odds talk / "omg i suck vs. omg this guy's good".
um Yeah.. my verse was better than a verse about shit & poop.

Still, his was good too (tic tac's). So I could understand someone voting for it. But not in the dismissive way that you did, Guerrero. Draw out some of the rhymes please. Dumbass.

So Guerrero, just as I'm sure you stand by your statement that I suck, I stand by my statement that you are a moron who can eat a dick. Or a whole bag of dicks.
Pharaohs Army is offline  
Old 09-13-2014, 05:33 PM   #2
Red Soldier
T.Guerrero
 
Red Soldier's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 96
Battle Record: 3-2



Rep Power: 0
Red Soldier is an unknown quantity at this point
Default

Smh every site has one cat that can't understand the difference between audio n text. And I think you're the winner.
Red Soldier is offline  
Old 09-13-2014, 10:07 PM   #3
Pharaohs Army
Banned
 
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14



Rep Power: 0
Pharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant future
Default

I will concede a LITTLE bit of ground here Guerrero.
But just a little bit.
There are a handful of beats it's very good for, but upon further review there are also some beats that aren't good for it.
Like most people, I like to make verses work for Any beat; in that respect it is not as good as I originally thought, and the audio/text paradigm comes into play a bit. But it's still pretty good.
Pharaohs Army is offline  
Old 09-14-2014, 08:04 AM   #4
Kill Spree
Senior Member
 
Kill Spree's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2014
Posts: 4,460
Battle Record: 3-3



Rep Power: 37645698
Kill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant futureKill Spree has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by pharaohsarmy52 View Post
I will concede a LITTLE bit of ground here Guerrero.
But just a little bit.
There are a handful of beats it's very good for, but upon further review there are also some beats that aren't good for it.
Like most people, I like to make verses work for Any beat; in that respect it is not as good as I originally thought, and the audio/text paradigm comes into play a bit. But it's still pretty good.
Your verse wasn't really good
Kill Spree is offline  
Old 09-15-2014, 08:20 PM   #5
Pharaohs Army
Banned
 
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14



Rep Power: 0
Pharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant futurePharaohs Army has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Beans View Post
Your verse wasn't really good
Thanks for your input.

I'm at a level where I actually judge my own shit.
I know my mediocre stuff from my good stuff.

Thing is, nowadays I'm trying to be able to execute the thing. Been working on my delivery. Don't laugh but I've already reached certain "pinnacles" after focusing on the text aspect for over a year. I made a conscious decision to format things for my personal practice. Simplifications at times. In short, I'm such a veteran that to some of you sheep I may appear noobish.

I'm not here to 'wow' myself or anybody else; just trying to become good enough to make tracks with cool lyrics. So I suppose I should stick more to my own pieces as opposed to competing in battles or tourneys.

I know it's rap 'battles' but I think direct punches are over-rated. Metaphors and wordplay are great but often times people try too hard or go out of their way to force them.

Ignore these things all you wish. If 1 person understands, then it was worth the post.
Pharaohs Army is offline  
Old 09-16-2014, 03:04 PM   #6
Blanco Bishop
Senior Member
 
Blanco Bishop's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2013
Location: Cali
Posts: 1,460
Battle Record: 11-20



Rep Power: 4150485
Blanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant futureBlanco Bishop has a brilliant future
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by pharaohsarmy52 View Post
Thanks for your input.

I'm at a level where I actually judge my own shit.
I know my mediocre stuff from my good stuff.

Thing is, nowadays I'm trying to be able to execute the thing. Been working on my delivery. Don't laugh but I've already reached certain "pinnacles" after focusing on the text aspect for over a year. I made a conscious decision to format things for my personal practice. Simplifications at times. In short, I'm such a veteran that to some of you sheep I may appear noobish.

I'm not here to 'wow' myself or anybody else; just trying to become good enough to make tracks with cool lyrics. So I suppose I should stick more to my own pieces as opposed to competing in battles or tourneys.

I know it's rap 'battles' but I think direct punches are over-rated. Metaphors and wordplay are great but often times people try too hard or go out of their way to force them.

Ignore these things all you wish. If 1 person understands, then it was worth the post.



Lol.


Great post bud.



Made me laugh a great amount.
Blanco Bishop is offline  
Closed Thread

Tags
meth is a giniggerger.

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:02 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+