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Old 09-11-2014, 10:34 PM   #1
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Don't count on it. I got some pretty good lines that explains how gay you are, why you don't have a girlfriend and that your mother is a whore.

blah blah blah. keep talkin bout my Family,Guy
and end up in a wheelchair like Joe Swanson, but in actual life
here's two middle fingers up plus the F word
cuz it aint my mom on the corner Obscene,Gestures
ima 70/30 favorite to advance and take the dub
according to predictions from Sharp,Object wont make the cut
it's 9/11, a day of remembrance for losses suffered
by records, it'd take next anniversary to reflect on all urs fucker
dude tryna be a Gangster bully, battlin rookies
but he's not hood bcuz if OBGY Nigga acting pussy


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Old 09-11-2014, 11:20 PM   #2
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None would be surprised if your boring ass life memorized Desperate Housewives,
I can tell you hike by yourself to escape crackpipes and keeping your wrists away from jacknives.
You've never had a real opinion in your life, and you know that it's right dude,
you'd get happy slapped and still question whether or not you support their reason to fight you.
When cops come storming your place and charge you for bringing down your race and being putrid,
your nick's based on what you say as half your face have paralyzed itself for being attached to stupid.
If how you act on the boards reflect how you are in person you're worthless,
I'm not speaking about battles and posts without purpose, you just seem constantly nervous;
You're keeping a clean slate, a stupid perfectionist whose persona is equally weak and fake,
a country of you's a dictators dream state, someone show this no personality having fuck to Eden Lake.
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Old 09-11-2014, 11:56 PM   #3
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ima 70/30 favorite to advance and take the dub
according to predictions from Sharp,Object wont make the cut - lotb
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Didn't quote the OBGY bar bc I'm pretty sure it's OB/GYN. Not a big fan of one letter np's, but it had potential. It just felt incomplete.

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None would be surprised if your boring ass life memorized Desperate Housewives,
I can tell you hike by yourself to escape crackpipes and keeping your wrists away from jacknives.
You've never had a real opinion in your life, and you know that it's right dude,
you'd get happy slapped and still question whether or not you support their reason to fight you.
Your entire verse read more like a S&F. I really liked it, but I recognize it didn't necessarily have the witticism and cleverness that I tend to look for in a text battle. I quoted the 2 bars, even though they came across as statementish, bc I didn't want to make it seem like I didn't enjoy the vers3 in its entirety. Bc I dug those bars alot, but not by the criteria I use to judge battles.


After reading Jilti's I thought Objective had a big shot at winning due to the lack of consistency and misses, but Objective's verse just really didn't have the battle format that I personally prefer. Everyone has their own style and bc of this I won't dog it bc I did like it for what is was.

I have this scored 2-1 Objective but Jils bar was lotb so that cancels out 1 of Objective's making it 1-1. To break the draw I'm going to go with the bar that impressed me the most and that was Jiltis.

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