Round 2: 5. kannon vs. 13 jilti \\ kannon wins 7-1

[trap]

Kannon had a super impressive story. Something that could essentially be 80+ lines, cut into 10 and still said succinctly. It also helps that you're a rapper so you wrote this with some great schemes / patterns. No real qualms here. Jilti had a kix of intellectuality and religion, and I don't know if those two mix, lol. I would've enjoyed some continuity in this verse. If you're going to stretch the lines, at least do it how Mike did it in his verse this week. This honestly read like a thesis or article from some religious or scientific journal. It was offputting to me, but thats just my opinion.

Vote, kannon.