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I get that Jilti mentioned this was a quick key for deadline sakes, but it still wasn't a good verse from neither combatant IMO.
Bar 1: PHARAOH Pharoah took this opener. I felt it flowed better, was funny, and was a good way to open yet Jilt's didn't flow as well and didn't really land or entertain to me. But neither bar was solid at all IMO. Bar 2: JILT Jilt took it easily. He had a decent metaphor that connected enough but Pharaoh just had a line devoid of any cleverness or originality, and the flow was ok but not enough to make up for it. Bar 3: Jilt took bar 3 cuz Pharaoh's was clearly very very primitive. a And that's disappointing. Jilt had a funny line that was simple but effective and flowed well. Bar 4: Was waaaay too simple for Pharaoh. So even though Jilti didn't go hard and had a very basic and simplistic line it was still enough to beat Pharaoh here. Bar 5: Not a fan of either line but Jilt took the closer clearly. V/ JILTI
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