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Old 08-31-2014, 10:32 PM   #1
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mgk was a cool verse but a bit blase and wouldve liked o have seen a twist on that beaten horse

franks was ill imo

while the pedestrians looked on drawn like the moth to the torch of humanity
My mothers corpse lie its black debris scorched to an ashy heap, gorgeous and ghastly she died dormant, I had to leave...
This ladder seems to be melting in the early morning 4 alarm portrait of catastrophe
The Firefighter looks over at me immorally with authority, remorselessly with apathy
And says "Don't look down..." morbidly, flames, orangey, flashy.


^^ nasty

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