Round 1: 13. pharaohsarmy52 vs. 4. Pinot Grij \\ Pinot Grij Wins 5-0

trap · 08-30-2014, 08:01 AM

Phar - Felt like an interesting short story, just missing a few key elements of rhyme format. For half of it, the rhyming part. I actually read it 3 or 4 times and really enjoyed what was written. Would've got my vote in a free form poetry contest.

Pinot - Noone ever takes this route with topicals, and I'm glad you did it and actually did it well. Made me laugh a bit. Well written structure wise and any other way.

If phar had any semblance of structure or a rhyme I feel like this would've been a very difficult battle to vote on.

Vote, Pinot.

08-30-2014, 08:01 AM	#9
trap Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: KCMO. Posts: 377 Rep Power: 14025267	Phar - Felt like an interesting short story, just missing a few key elements of rhyme format. For half of it, the rhyming part. I actually read it 3 or 4 times and really enjoyed what was written. Would've got my vote in a free form poetry contest. Pinot - Noone ever takes this route with topicals, and I'm glad you did it and actually did it well. Made me laugh a bit. Well written structure wise and any other way. If phar had any semblance of structure or a rhyme I feel like this would've been a very difficult battle to vote on. Vote, Pinot. __________________ triplet syllables for minimal criminals.

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