Round 1: R. CopyPat vs. 7. Diode \\ Diode wins 9-1

UnbornBuddha · 08-29-2014, 06:40 PM

Copycat's verse although it might bring chuckles due to his graviotional force interpretation, and its impact on the feminine corporeality/ physique it lacked the entertaining technical jest that Diode's had. Copycat's flowed well as I found it, and in comparing the renditions I was at first leaning toward Copycat's. But, as I reread I found Diode methodical wording more appealing, and soon the verse began to be more enticing, though a bit off putting due to the sportsmanship acronyms that hindered the second last line.
Anyways, I vote for Diode.

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08-29-2014, 06:40 PM	#4
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	Copycat's verse although it might bring chuckles due to his graviotional force interpretation, and its impact on the feminine corporeality/ physique it lacked the entertaining technical jest that Diode's had. Copycat's flowed well as I found it, and in comparing the renditions I was at first leaning toward Copycat's. But, as I reread I found Diode methodical wording more appealing, and soon the verse began to be more enticing, though a bit off putting due to the sportsmanship acronyms that hindered the second last line. Anyways, I vote for Diode.