im a battler tho.

[Camp Bell]

this was....aite.

the rhyme schemes were subpar. the imagery was on point tho
i liked it, thought it seemed like a rushed key, rambling about how
barbaric you could be. im a rhyme monger tho, so thats why i didnt
think it was "dull boy dope" as far as that goes. but, you're bags, so
everyone will either ride hard or cape for you. good shit tho, i'd like
to collab, if you could slide your condescending ego aside for hiphop

lmaoooo

[Certain]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

the rhyme schemes were subpar.

What?

[Camp Bell]

Originally Posted by Certain

What?

im a rhyme monger tho, so thats why i didnt
think it was "dull boy dope" as far as that goes. but, you're bags, so
everyone will either ride hard or cape for you. good shit tho,


problem?

[Witty]

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

im a rhyme monger tho, so thats why i didnt
think it was "dull boy dope" as far as that goes. but, you're bags, so
everyone will either ride hard or cape for you. good shit tho,


problem?

I have a problem, you are wrong quite often.

Also, I am better than you.

[Camp Bell]

Originally Posted by Witty Wonka

I have a problem, you are wrong quite often.

Also, I am better than you.

damn, didnt notice you set a battle up between us
i should pay more attention.

[big baby]

Originally Posted by Certain

What?

I think he means the breaking up of syllables, which I agree to an extent. I didn't think this was relatively really good if you're going by a syllabic rhyme heavy affair. In a lot of instances, besides the John Belushi scheme he rhymes a lot of singular words with many syllables on them, and instances in which he rhymes more than 3 words the slants were so ridiculous they werent slants, and the so called prefix word was usually the singular rhyming one which was broken into smaller syllables in upcoming schemes, like farfagnugen, marmaduke shit, and the more prominent one to me (square in metropolis, hands of apocalypse) had of a more rhythmic flow rather than a matching syllable flow, except, very seemingly - the last word. square/hands don't have anything really to match up, that's on account of enunciation, not the cluster sounds.