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Vulgar · 08-27-2014, 07:05 PM

lol CopyPat puts in the time consistently and is friendly to other members here. Not really your style to be personable but that's completely fine.

Onto the verse, I thought it started off a little shaky but once you found your footing in the battle style, it was all uphill. I like your rhyming, reminds me of Freddie Fox and a rapper called BMS who worked with Masai Bey. (don't know if he made other music)

I think if you got more Wu Tang and unleashed that aspect of your personality, you'd do better. More imaginative, even flashy aggressive pieces, of course with that added bit of gutter raw. I still find it strange that you're a white guy.

this class is close to the end,
went from chilled mode to intense and left you motionless friend
^Nice.

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08-27-2014, 07:05 PM	#1
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	lol CopyPat puts in the time consistently and is friendly to other members here. Not really your style to be personable but that's completely fine. Onto the verse, I thought it started off a little shaky but once you found your footing in the battle style, it was all uphill. I like your rhyming, reminds me of Freddie Fox and a rapper called BMS who worked with Masai Bey. (don't know if he made other music) I think if you got more Wu Tang and unleashed that aspect of your personality, you'd do better. More imaginative, even flashy aggressive pieces, of course with that added bit of gutter raw. I still find it strange that you're a white guy. this class is close to the end, went from chilled mode to intense and left you motionless friend ^Nice.