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08-21-2014, 12:48 PM
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Championship Match: Destroyer vs. BROKE LESNAR - BROKE LESNAR wins
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08-21-2014, 01:16 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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Check.
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08-21-2014, 01:17 PM
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Bags will be avenged
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here we go
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08-21-2014, 06:03 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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ur the bomb
ur wife told me the first night u both smashed was gross and a total disaster cuz when u showed her ur package i.e. "D" she coldly exploded with laughter Last edited by BROKE LESNAR; 08-25-2014 at 11:10 AM. |
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08-25-2014, 01:42 PM
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Bags will be avenged
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that one is a lot better
des will slice u up into pieces, & neatly pile u up in the back of my truck & u'll be just another dude to go from BROKE to stacked.
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08-25-2014, 02:28 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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thiz one's close.... a toss up... Broke that was a straight bar...not extremely hard hitting tho' set up was clean
Des...set up also clean an your punch is a lil' harder in my opinion...but at the same time felt it coulda been a more creative nameplay thiz one's a toss up....cant call it .. but If I gotta pick....guess I gotta go wit' which one I thought was harder soooo... -Destro' |
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08-25-2014, 11:19 PM
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ghost in the matrix
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Tbh I liked Brooke's bar a bit more just because it was more creative IMO. I feel like all the broke nameplays are boring an even if done perfect still only holds so much weight anymore lol
vote broke
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08-26-2014, 01:44 AM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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BROKE LESNAR: That wordplay was forced as hell. The wording was really good here. But you could have done more with an "i.e. D" line if you really wanted to go that route, particularly since Destroyer starts with a D.
Destroyer: This was pretty mediocre, too. The wording was off, and the "broke" nameplay was way too simple and direct. The weird thing is both of you have written pretty well lately. I guess you just don't care much about this match, even if it's one bar. I'm going to vote for line I liked more and not feel good about this battle as a whole, particularly as a title match. Vote: BROKE LESNAR
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08-27-2014, 08:38 AM
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I like both but des's transition didn't read smooth to me.
Thought broke was a bit more polished this time around. V broke |
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08-28-2014, 03:50 AM
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I got broke
Close but the concept was slightly more fresh Vote - broke |
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08-28-2014, 04:23 PM
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Lyin
Join Date: Jun 2014
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Both dropped fire. Broke put more into it imo.
V/broke |
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08-28-2014, 09:16 PM
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Nasty
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Good battle neither had personals soo it came down to next flip and I think broke executed his concept a bit better here.
V. Broke |
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08-28-2014, 10:28 PM
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baz∞ka
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cool battle but i feel ones line hit alil harder
v/BROKE |
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08-28-2014, 11:05 PM
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broke's line was pretty dope, witty.
des line was ehh, broke to rich as in piled and stacked...nah vote: Broke
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