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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
Champed - AOWL Season 3
- Art of Writing League (2x)
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BROKE LESNAR: That wordplay was forced as hell. The wording was really good here. But you could have done more with an "i.e. D" line if you really wanted to go that route, particularly since Destroyer starts with a D.
Destroyer: This was pretty mediocre, too. The wording was off, and the "broke" nameplay was way too simple and direct. The weird thing is both of you have written pretty well lately. I guess you just don't care much about this match, even if it's one bar. I'm going to vote for line I liked more and not feel good about this battle as a whole, particularly as a title match. Vote: BROKE LESNAR
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