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08-23-2014, 01:47 PM
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song genius
Join Date: Sep 2013
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ur guys lines are way too stretched. legit too many syllables. remember what orwell said, the more words you require in a sentence, the less profound your ability to express yourself. shorten them up big time, legit, ight
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