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08-19-2014, 11:40 PM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 12,066
Battle Record: 40-19
Champed - AOWL Season 3
- Art of Writing League (2x)
Rep Power: 85899406   |
KnowP: Jaron Brown? Weird choice. This was OK, but it was basic and impersonal. You're in a championship match and have to write one punchline. Don't make it something you could use as line 6 in any battle ever.
Destroyer: This punch was a bit homosexual, but I'm not a homophobe. So if you want to get deep in his hole, there's nothing wrong with that. The line was somewhat clever. Vote: Destroyer
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