Quarter Final: Richard Schwartz vs. Template [RICHARD SCHWARTZ WINS 6-2]

Siu Mi · 08-18-2014, 02:41 AM

Richie valenz had a good-ish verse with an argument of real life versus cinema escapism and I felt like it could have gone deeper? Yea. The end line was good but more shoulda led up to the big shebang for more effective volume and what not. I liked the rhyming though ^.^

Stoned template pirate had a great idea and messed it up and made it all short and stuff and had me disappointed at the size :( but I enjoyed the bits you had though! I wish there was more to feast on because I love mythology and vikings and blood and stuff. But you were too short. So....

Dicks sporting goods wins on account of temp plates not having it all together ^.^

08-18-2014, 02:41 AM	#10
Siu Mi Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 25 Rep Power: 0	Richie valenz had a good-ish verse with an argument of real life versus cinema escapism and I felt like it could have gone deeper? Yea. The end line was good but more shoulda led up to the big shebang for more effective volume and what not. I liked the rhyming though ^.^ Stoned template pirate had a great idea and messed it up and made it all short and stuff and had me disappointed at the size :( but I enjoyed the bits you had though! I wish there was more to feast on because I love mythology and vikings and blood and stuff. But you were too short. So.... Dicks sporting goods wins on account of temp plates not having it all together ^.^ __________________ love is

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