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08-05-2014, 02:40 AM
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Baby Cakes [VS] Audi Boys [Audi Boys WINS]
 @big baby and @El Pancake @Hush and @Allen Knight Rules Due Dates:
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08-13-2014, 12:26 AM
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08-13-2014, 04:33 AM
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08-13-2014, 08:02 PM
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I'll avoid that low hanging fruit...and let your immediate families pick it for me You bitches are boring; Allen's a low rent mechanic. Delusional; son is a wreck 'cause how the fuck you an Audi Boy when you don't even have the resume to be one of the Peps? hush ALWAYS rubbed me 4 being oddly peculiar.. so in certains HOF thread I voted for vic..... on being suspect hush nodded & whispered: i voted for rubbing vicks on @Suths pecs lisp having homo. only pills you bitch asses promo involves ExtenZe so when hush pulled his biscuit in the middle of the knight it proved u 2 are beyond best friends And VIC SELLS DRUGS! Just ask! He's slinging sess, a excellent mover with respectable shooters everyone questions you, loser... When the closest you come to militant is typing "Salute" to a Post and adding rep to a user both ur hispanic mami's shouted to nut in, when i pulled out, around on their stomachs busted in BOTH w/o any rubbers, on ya mothers kithen top.... it was sorta counter-productive audi boys? you decked out your A4's in 50 shades of gay. Used the 8 rings for nip buckles u hate my boarding, but only time mustachios a prick is when hush's upper lip jungle, brushes against allens dick stubble Thug life. You got gun bars, tech and rugers. No one believes you, stop it, it's lame One punch'll leave you bleeding like a stuck pig that'll put YOUR grill topic to shame
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08-14-2014, 12:14 AM
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I got bitches feeding me grapes & rubbing my feet im dumb lucky
This faggot baby's idea of pampering himself is coppin some pull ups from huggies Ak runs trains on dime pieces, & u couldn't get a hoe sucker I got pimpin down to a science, Big bang theory's fuckin 4 nerdy dudes w/ no rubber gotta arsonal of weapons, tech w/ the laser pointed at yah back son & leave baby shower'd w/ hollows till his spine is ripped open like presents at one pans down in the dumpster, no money, no girl that otta kill'em Ur lifes been sucha joke its depressing next step is to off ur self like robin williams cake ur garbage at writing, faggot go back to benching sacks Cuz pancreatitis verse he ever made & that shit'll still be gut wrenching wack Had potential but that shit faded, wheres the verses he claims he torching crashed on the road to success cuz ur styles more mangled than Tracy morgan Pan u can't hide ur a faggot, u just wanna meet men Cuz Its no suprise theres been male strippers goin in cake every weekend BB has a story for all his gay ass aliases, stfu I had it u herb Idc if ur bi-polar ur spilt personalities are all 50-50 between faggot and nerd
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08-14-2014, 03:08 PM
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Baby Cakes:
1 - lol at first line, the irony was good and punch itself was decent 2 - pep boys line was aight, connection was a bit strange for me. I mean I get it but., 3 - hush rubbed you for being peculiar, if read wrong that's gay. Anyway the set up bar could've been tightened. Lol @ rubbing Vicks on Suths pecs lol that's a goofy bar. Lisp angle could've been worked in better but I like the idea. 4 - ok, simple n not effective 5 - i like the respectable shooter excellent mover multis, punch was dry unless I'm missing something. 6 - counter productive made me chuckle but it's just kind of silly 7 - ha, wtf... Decent I guess 8 - ok personal Overall you guys have an unorthodox style of punches. Some weird thoughts but some cool bars Audi Boys: 1 - pampering is kind of silly here, bc it has the word pamper but pampering urself with pampers.. Use of word pampering here is off but not to think too technically this is ok 2 - Big Bang theory bar works on multiple levels, I like it, would've been more points if u left off no rubber part 3 - not feeling 4 - Robin Williams bar was predictable and not cleverly put together 5 - pancreatitis bar needed lots of work, pan create tightest is passable for wordplay but not by much 6 - this is just a simple comparison bar not much creativity 7 - lol this is nice, kept it simple but clever 8 - ehhh not really here Overall you had some cool stuff that was badly worded. A couple good zingers in there. Ok this was a close battle bc it had weird misses from both sides. You guys could clean things up by being a bit more simple but it seems you tried to be overly creative and couldn't bring it all together... It was a close battle I had to judge by points. Baby Cake - 18.6/40 Audi Boys - 18.4/ 40 MVGT Baby Cake
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08-14-2014, 05:27 PM
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Originally Posted by Allen Knight
Need an extenZe. Mexican lines? Different story. It's too easy to write plus the shit be corny I'll avoid that low hanging fruit...and let your immediate families pick it for me dead@ sayin u wont write a mex line then proceeded with a mex line.lol clever punch tho You bitches are boring; Allen's a low rent mechanic. Delusional; son is a wreck 'cause how the fuck you an Audi Boy when you don't even have the resume to be one of the Peps? ill. Smooth wording n perfect use of wreck hush ALWAYS rubbed me 4 being oddly peculiar.. so in certains HOF thread I voted for vic..... on being suspect hush nodded & whispered: i voted for rubbing vicks on @Suths pecs Lol. Setup is off tho lisp having homo. only pills you bitch asses promo involves ExtenZe so when hush pulled his biscuit in the middle of the knight it proved u 2 are beyond best friends hmm. Sounds dated. And VIC SELLS DRUGS! Just ask! He's slinging sess, a excellent mover with respectable shooters everyone questions you, loser... When the closest you come to militant is typing "Salute" to a Post and adding rep to a user fire both ur hispanic mami's shouted to nut in, when i pulled out, around on their stomachs busted in BOTH w/o any rubbers, on ya mothers kithen top.... it was sorta counter-productive great concept. Botched execution audi boys? you decked out your A4's in 50 shades of gay. Used the 8 rings for nip buckles u hate my boarding, but only time mustachios a prick is when hush's upper lip jungle, brushes against allens dick stubble Lmao. Could of condensed it better imo tho. Thug life. You got gun bars, tech and rugers. No one believes you, stop it, it's lame One punch'll leave you bleeding like a stuck pig that'll put YOUR grill topic to shame decent got bitches feeding me grapes & rubbing my feet im dumb lucky This faggot baby's idea of pampering himself is coppin some pull ups from huggies l ma o! Lotb Ak runs trains on dime pieces, & u couldn't get a hoe sucker I got pimpin down to a science, Big bang theory's fuckin 4 nerdy dudes w/ no rubber bonkys gotta arsonal of weapons, tech w/ the laser pointed at yah back son & leave baby shower'd w/ hollows till his spine is ripped open like presents at one nice pans down in the dumpster, no money, no girl that otta kill'em Ur lifes been sucha joke its depressing next step is to off ur self like robin williams naw. Already read plenty rw barz n this wasnt the best one. cake ur garbage at writing, faggot go back to benching sacks Cuz pancreatitis verse he ever made & that shit'll still be gut wrenching wack lol ok. I like this np Had potential but that shit faded, wheres the verses he claims he torching crashed on the road to success cuz ur styles more mangled than Tracy morgan nothing too deep Pan u can't hide ur a faggot, u just wanna meet men Cuz Its no suprise theres been male strippers goin in cake every weekend Bu fuckin na nas BB has a story for all his gay ass aliases, stfu I had it u herb Idc if ur bi-polar ur spilt personalities are all 50-50 between faggot and nerd sick shit Damn. Tough battle to vote on. Bbcakes had the comedy. Audib had the haymakers. Ultimately....reviewing my reactions to every bar i got audi with harsher bars. Great showing by both cliks but audi was a tad bit more creative. V audi |
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08-14-2014, 08:01 PM
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Mexican lines? Different story. It's too easy to write plus the shit be corny I'll avoid that low hanging fruit...and let your immediate families pick it for me Cool You bitches are boring; Allen's a low rent mechanic. Delusional; son is a wreck 'cause how the fuck you an Audi Boy when you don't even have the resume to be one of the Peps? Good hush ALWAYS rubbed me 4 being oddly peculiar.. so in certains HOF thread I voted for vic..... on being suspect hush nodded & whispered: i voted for rubbing vicks on @Suths pecs Okay lisp having homo. only pills you bitch asses promo involves ExtenZe so when hush pulled his biscuit in the middle of the knight it proved u 2 are beyond best friends Didn't like this And VIC SELLS DRUGS! Just ask! He's slinging sess, a excellent mover with respectable shooters everyone questions you, loser... When the closest you come to militant is typing "Salute" to a Post and adding rep to a user Lmao both ur hispanic mami's shouted to nut in, when i pulled out, around on their stomachs busted in BOTH w/o any rubbers, on ya mothers kithen top.... it was sorta counter-productive Nice audi boys? you decked out your A4's in 50 shades of gay. Used the 8 rings for nip buckles u hate my boarding, but only time mustachios a prick is when hush's upper lip jungle, brushes against allens dick stubble Ehh-ish Thug life. You got gun bars, tech and rugers. No one believes you, stop it, it's lame One punch'll leave you bleeding like a stuck pig that'll put YOUR grill topic to shame Lol AudiBoys I got bitches feeding me grapes & rubbing my feet im dumb lucky This faggot baby's idea of pampering himself is coppin some pull ups from huggies Cool Ak runs trains on dime pieces, & u couldn't get a hoe sucker I got pimpin down to a science, Big bang theory's fuckin 4 nerdy dudes w/ no rubber Nah gotta arsonal of weapons, tech w/ the laser pointed at yah back son & leave baby shower'd w/ hollows till his spine is ripped open like presents at one Cool-ish pans down in the dumpster, no money, no girl that otta kill'em Ur lifes been sucha joke its depressing next step is to off ur self like robin Williams Lol liked this execution, no pun intended cake ur garbage at writing, faggot go back to benching sacks Cuz pancreatitis verse he ever made & that shit'll still be gut wrenching wack Ok, a little forced wp though Had potential but that shit faded, wheres the verses he claims he torching crashed on the road to success cuz ur styles more mangled than Tracy morgan Good Pan u can't hide ur a faggot, u just wanna meet men Cuz Its no suprise theres been male strippers goin in cake every weekend Solid BB has a story for all his gay ass aliases, stfu I had it u herb Idc if ur bi-polar ur spilt personalities are all 50-50 between faggot and nerd Lol Good battle. I'm going for BabyCakes because they had harder hitters. It was a close match, funny lines from both teams. |
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08-14-2014, 11:40 PM
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08-15-2014, 02:31 AM
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Baby Cakes: Your styles don't mesh ideally, so the back-and-forth cypher-style verse was a bit offputting. But there were some solid lines, nonetheless. The opening two couplets in particular were very good, as were the last two. The lisp line wasn't tightly executed enough. The middle eight as a whole was a bit weaker, but I liked the salute line a lot. The different styles kind of come together a bit more toward the end, and the rhyming was particularly impressive here.
Audi Boys: I take it this whole verse was written by Allen Knight. The pancreatitis line was the best of the battle, and the baby shower line had a lot of potential but the way you worded the end of that line dulled the hit. A few times you just went way too obvious and uncreative, particularly on generic lines like the Robin Williams and Tracy Morgan bars. The final two couplets were OK, and the opener was good. But the second couplet was the worst of the battle. Tightening up the wording and adding another level of creativity to the Robin Williams and Tracy Morgan lines could have won you this battle. Vote: Baby Cakes
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08-15-2014, 01:11 PM
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I got bitches feeding me grapes & rubbing my feet im dumb lucky
This faggot baby's idea of pampering himself is coppin some pull ups from huggies gotta arsonal of weapons, tech w/ the laser pointed at yah back son & leave baby shower'd w/ hollows till his spine is ripped open like presents at one Had potential but that shit faded, wheres the verses he claims he torching crashed on the road to success cuz ur styles more mangled than Tracy morgan vs Mexican lines? Different story. It's too easy to write plus the shit be corny I'll avoid that low hanging fruit...and let your immediate families pick it for me And VIC SELLS DRUGS! Just ask! He's slinging sess, a excellent mover with respectable shooters everyone questions you, loser... When the closest you come to militant is typing "Salute" to a Post and adding rep to a user v- Audi Boys. lots of BC shit was stretched out of this world, i let them have one ".......... PRESS ENTER ............. *insert words*" bar, but tbh, a lot of that shit was worded harshly, just expanding so far on my computer screen. Audi had better worded and structured lines that won based on consistency. idk who wrote the two decent lines for BC but u did better than I expected. idk if Allen wrote this by himself, but his wording was all over this without a sign of Hush doing part of the verse. that user line was LOTB but wasn't enough to win |
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08-15-2014, 05:10 PM
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08-15-2014, 06:27 PM
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gotta arsonal of weapons, tech w/ the laser pointed at yah back son & leave baby shower'd w/ hollows till his spine is ripped open like presents at one Pan u can't hide ur a faggot, u just wanna meet men Cuz Its no suprise theres been male strippers goin in cake every weekend Baby Cakes Mexican lines? Different story. It's too easy to write plus the shit be corny I'll avoid that low hanging fruit...and let your immediate families pick it for me You bitches are boring; Allen's a low rent mechanic. Delusional; son is a wreck 'cause how the fuck you an Audi Boy when you don't even have the resume to be one of the Peps? Damn this shit was close b, I got two quotes from both and both had a jab and a punch that landed... the solid punch was between the Pep boys line and the Cake line... I liked the Pep boy line better... between the jabs it was the mexican and baby shower line and the baby shower line was better... now to the other lines in both verses Baby Cakes fell completely off after these two lines to me while Audi Boys weren't that bad just not hits.. so i gotta vote Audi Boys
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08-15-2014, 06:52 PM
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Mexican lines? Different story. It's too easy to write plus the shit be corny
I'll avoid that low hanging fruit...and let your immediate families pick it for me And VIC SELLS DRUGS! Just ask! He's slinging sess, a excellent mover with respectable shooters everyone questions you, loser... When the closest you come to militant is typing "Salute" to a Post and adding rep to a user audi boys? you decked out your A4's in 50 shades of gay. Used the 8 rings for nip buckles u hate my boarding, but only time mustachios a prick is when hush's upper lip jungle, brushes against allens dick stubble vs. I got bitches feeding me grapes & rubbing my feet im dumb lucky This faggot baby's idea of pampering himself is coppin some pull ups from huggies gotta arsonal of weapons, tech w/ the laser pointed at yah back son & leave baby shower'd w/ hollows till his spine is ripped open like presents at one Pan u can't hide ur a faggot, u just wanna meet men Cuz Its no suprise theres been male strippers goin in cake every weekend Really close battle, I definitely enjoyed this but expected Knight and Hush to do better. I assume they took BB and Cake lightly, which they had every right to do....cause lmao @ Dancake and BB. But Cake and BB had the LOTB to me with the opener, however the rest of the verse was just not on par and super stretched to read. Hush and Allen weren't very consistent, but theres was an easier read and I really enjoyed that baby showers line. Close, but if I had to vote I got the Audi Boys. V/ Audi Boys
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08-15-2014, 06:54 PM
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audi got this
although baby cakes had some good concepts just the wording wasn't harsh enough like the salute line hush/ak just had the wording/consistency and got this v/audi boys |
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Mexican fruit shit was funny
but Allen and hush just came way harsher I like most of their lines, even AK's simple ones I dunno about that pancreatitis tho... does that really work? someone needs to explain it to me. it won't be paradigm cause that dude doesn't read any votes except for the last part that says who wins either way, I have the Latinos taking this pretty handily v/audi
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Audi Boys wins 7-3.
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