writin' 'bout writing again

Zen · 08-13-2014, 07:36 PM

You're my favorite from the spokenvswritten bunch. You've got a sense of humor and don't really give a fuck. That's good, the whole "don't take me seriously" approach. It works in your writing. Especially the section where you started talking about rhyming family with funny, and how sad lines make you laugh. That's good.

The writing itself though, never was something that I looked at and considered it "great". I'm sure this was a keystyle, but I'd like to read something more fleshed out from you than these keystyles, holmes.

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08-13-2014, 07:36 PM	#7
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	You're my favorite from the spokenvswritten bunch. You've got a sense of humor and don't really give a fuck. That's good, the whole "don't take me seriously" approach. It works in your writing. Especially the section where you started talking about rhyming family with funny, and how sad lines make you laugh. That's good. The writing itself though, never was something that I looked at and considered it "great". I'm sure this was a keystyle, but I'd like to read something more fleshed out from you than these keystyles, holmes.