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sick battle.
Seadad - good verse. or verses. this didn't feel like a complete song to me for some reason. had a dope vibe to it though. this beat suits you. good story line. nice flow. this was a good listen. i really enjoyed it. props kanon - this was pretty sick. as opposed to seadad this did feel like a complete song. a very good one at that. your quality is real top notch. the story that you created was compelling. I was fully invested. the twist was entertaining overall - I think flow wise, it was pretty close. both did well there. seadad shines through a bit in some aspects because tbh he has a better voice. that's not the say all end all though. I just think that seadad could probably spit the verse kanon wrote better than he did. but ya all in all , this wasn't really close. kanon had a sick song, id play it in my car, it had a beginning, middle and an end. it was really polished track. seadad just dropped like half a song imo. which is sad. I wonder if he threw in the white flag almost , saying fuck it I don't care if I win. cause he certainly didn't give full effort and by that I mean he didn't deliver a full song. great battle though. you guys are dope. vote kannon oh and @kannon maybe the topic wasn't so lame after all. it provided the inspiration for a really dope ride
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