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Ok slightly longer than 20 minutes lol This was an enjoyable read, insightful and poetic, it brought up a lot of familiar feelings for me. It was very short but I didn't think it needed to be much longer tbh Your writing, I'd imagine, would be very accessible to most people which is something not everyone can say, there are some people you can only really appreciate fully if you're also a writer but you have a more universal feel to your writing, you let everyone in and word your thoughts very well, which is something I always try to do...I don't want anyone to feel left out, to me the mark of a great writer is someone who can effectively communicate with any sort of person, any race, any age, any gender, etc...and you do this very well. Thanks for the read.
Also I died a bit @ North Korea is not Voldemort. How can you be sure tho? ARE YOU SURE OATS???
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