R2: Seymour Butts vs. Peter McPuffington - [Flawless Ass 8-0]

Jhene Aiko · 08-11-2014, 01:38 AM

Peter -- the fact that you wrote about tesla is cool as fuck. The part where u didn't go into any of his awesomely weird tests like the teleportation stuff makes me furious. I understand the angle which you chose to wrote at but it made this out to be a bland bio-rap with a touch of socioeconomics. Not the shit tesla deserved.

Butts - sick verse man. Not many folks can carry out a story with as clean of a control of language and rhyme as this exhibited. There has been my favorite submission so far and you are my favorite to win this.

Vote butts

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08-11-2014, 01:38 AM	#9
Jhene Aiko Poems For Aero Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 7 Rep Power: 3436009	Peter -- the fact that you wrote about tesla is cool as fuck. The part where u didn't go into any of his awesomely weird tests like the teleportation stuff makes me furious. I understand the angle which you chose to wrote at but it made this out to be a bland bio-rap with a touch of socioeconomics. Not the shit tesla deserved. Butts - sick verse man. Not many folks can carry out a story with as clean of a control of language and rhyme as this exhibited. There has been my favorite submission so far and you are my favorite to win this. Vote butts