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08-02-2014, 12:36 PM
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Arm the Homeless
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Ooooh, I think I know who you is.
For the post I'd say this was worded perfect except for the paints the West in red line. I felt like that rhyme came a little too soon and threw off the pacing a bit. This was cool though. |
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