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Old 07-31-2014, 09:38 PM   #9
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Kin was on beat throughout. I'm not sure the point of the quadruple time flow aside from you saying it's original. Sometimes things haven't been done yet for a reason. Then after that, on your second verse you tried to go too complex and severely butcherd both cadence and flow. Kin came correct, as I said stayed on point. The first verse I wasn't feeling though, I felt you went too slow. After chorus and second verse I gave another hear to first verse and Def appreciated it more but still seemed a bit off.

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