Sermon on the dark knight (Batman)

Adverse · 07-28-2014, 11:53 PM

Idk.
Like the rhyme schemes and vocabulary were on point, but I just couldn't keep up with it, it was kind of scattered and I was just like 'how the fuck does he get all of this out of Batman?' lol i mean it was a cool read none the less though.

"The poor mourning Wayne blames his sluggish Batmobile,
The alluring loony that is Joker won't stop his laughs until
killing all the little children trapped and sealed in the plot the madman build.
An injured billionaire heals under Alfred's meals, who offers willingly
a mantra of hope against the fear that even god then kneels."

Liked that piece right there.

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07-28-2014, 11:53 PM	#6
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Idk. Like the rhyme schemes and vocabulary were on point, but I just couldn't keep up with it, it was kind of scattered and I was just like 'how the fuck does he get all of this out of Batman?' lol i mean it was a cool read none the less though. "The poor mourning Wayne blames his sluggish Batmobile, The alluring loony that is Joker won't stop his laughs until killing all the little children trapped and sealed in the plot the madman build. An injured billionaire heals under Alfred's meals, who offers willingly a mantra of hope against the fear that even god then kneels." Liked that piece right there.