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07-24-2014, 11:27 AM
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White Earl
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not a fan of this one fig. see what you were doing though. the idea was cool. but something about the way you carried it out was to, i dont know, predictable? maybe thats not the best word
but the mechanics were cool. concept was cool. just didnt hit home the way i wanted it to
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