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07-24-2014, 08:11 AM
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Nalyubuites
Join Date: Jun 2014
Posts: 449
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Always dug your rhyme scheme. The last Half of your verse made me nostalgic AF. Not sure if this was just a warm up piece but I recommend migrating back to your grimey, cut throat style of aggressive wording. On mobile so I won't quote but you had at least six bars that stuck out. Collabo?
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