K2 extinction event description.

YDK · 07-23-2014, 09:42 PM

I loved this piece simply because I fucking LOVE dinosaurs lmfao
the flow here wasn't impeccable as I've come to expect from you but the imagery and the detailed account of how everything occurred was really outstanding.
Considering how much depth there really was with the different era's of dinosaurs (Jurassic, Mesozoic cretaceous etc) you really could have written probably ten times the length of this so you did well keeping it brief while still fitting a ton of relative information in AND keeping it interesting and rhyming...which is very hard to do all at once.
So props on this bro, keep scribing

07-23-2014, 09:42 PM	#9
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	I loved this piece simply because I fucking LOVE dinosaurs lmfao the flow here wasn't impeccable as I've come to expect from you but the imagery and the detailed account of how everything occurred was really outstanding. Considering how much depth there really was with the different era's of dinosaurs (Jurassic, Mesozoic cretaceous etc) you really could have written probably ten times the length of this so you did well keeping it brief while still fitting a ton of relative information in AND keeping it interesting and rhyming...which is very hard to do all at once. So props on this bro, keep scribing __________________

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