Round 3: 14. YDK vs. 7. timeless \\ YDK wins 5-(-4)

d0ubt · 07-20-2014, 02:36 PM

i'm on my phone and don't actualy want to vote. but you two are two of my favorite writers on this site. timeless, i felt your piece was underwhelming compared to many i have read from you, it felt less polished and maybe the story itself seemed rushed and not all that entertaining. and kuhn, you just keep improving man, i tend to read one of every five or ten verses from you and they always seem like you're still improving so much. cool story, i really enjoyed it, felt polished and well thought out. i feel kuhn had this battle in every aspect i judge a battle on. if timeless brought his best this would feel less one sided to me. good luck to you guys in the votes and i wish the winner luck in the finals.

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07-20-2014, 02:36 PM	#4
d0ubt Member Join Date: Apr 2014 Posts: 72 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	i'm on my phone and don't actualy want to vote. but you two are two of my favorite writers on this site. timeless, i felt your piece was underwhelming compared to many i have read from you, it felt less polished and maybe the story itself seemed rushed and not all that entertaining. and kuhn, you just keep improving man, i tend to read one of every five or ten verses from you and they always seem like you're still improving so much. cool story, i really enjoyed it, felt polished and well thought out. i feel kuhn had this battle in every aspect i judge a battle on. if timeless brought his best this would feel less one sided to me. good luck to you guys in the votes and i wish the winner luck in the finals.