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07-14-2014, 10:38 AM
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Tread Lightly.
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,533
Battle Record: 26-9
Champed - Netcees Battle League
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Greed's concept was a little better but not executed cleanly enough (onus is on you to make sure readers get it, not on them to dig). By contrast Broke's wording was much better, enough that I preferred his bar overall.
V/ Broke
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