Sharp Nine [VS] pav [Sharp Nine WINS]

jilti · 07-13-2014, 12:07 PM

Pav..

The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear
with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
really liked the wording and flow of this bar, good hit
.. I dont see no real emcee, I just see an imposture
Cuz with battles – u stay ducking and slipping.. ur like a peek-a-boo boxer
nice setup, coulda worded the punch wayyy better though. Seen where u were going with this especially with the very next bar containing boxers names, and i liked the ducking and slipping tie in. However, the wording wasnt good at the end and felt cheesy
But me? Im a vet killer aka the head splitter
U a giant? Well consider this Jack Dempsey vs Jess Willard
dope multis, solid punch
.. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit
I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..
seen the para-dime concept used before but it was still cool
Honestly.. ur prolly gay with a man who u put in mad work to please
and have hitting bareback.. like Schwarzenegger playin Hercules
decent closer here

Sharp..

Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win
aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn
lol good line
Plus you could only win with your old pals, now you're prolly boned
my man you've had more obvious joint rides than Fig driving stoned
ok
I've had close calls with legends. your bitch ass can't be talking
if those were toss ups.. this is a jump ball between Chris Bosh n Steven Hawking
bragging about close calls instead of actual wins?? w/e cool line nonetheless
Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook
A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
seen this concept used before, but it was still decent
But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame
Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame
lol nice closer

I enjoyed reading pavs verse more. Sharp had some bland punches mixed with good ones and was consistent with no discernible bad ones. i liked pavs flow better, but he had a shaky attempt with the peek-a-boo line. In a close 10 line battle, that makes a difference. enough to give my vote to Sharp

Vote-Sharp

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07-13-2014, 12:07 PM	#12
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Pav.. The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there really liked the wording and flow of this bar, good hit .. I dont see no real emcee, I just see an imposture Cuz with battles – u stay ducking and slipping.. ur like a peek-a-boo boxer nice setup, coulda worded the punch wayyy better though. Seen where u were going with this especially with the very next bar containing boxers names, and i liked the ducking and slipping tie in. However, the wording wasnt good at the end and felt cheesy But me? Im a vet killer aka the head splitter U a giant? Well consider this Jack Dempsey vs Jess Willard dope multis, solid punch .. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it.. seen the para-dime concept used before but it was still cool Honestly.. ur prolly gay with a man who u put in mad work to please and have hitting bareback.. like Schwarzenegger playin Hercules decent closer here Sharp.. Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn lol good line Plus you could only win with your old pals, now you're prolly boned my man you've had more obvious joint rides than Fig driving stoned ok I've had close calls with legends. your bitch ass can't be talking if those were toss ups.. this is a jump ball between Chris Bosh n Steven Hawking bragging about close calls instead of actual wins?? w/e cool line nonetheless Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook seen this concept used before, but it was still decent But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame lol nice closer I enjoyed reading pavs verse more. Sharp had some bland punches mixed with good ones and was consistent with no discernible bad ones. i liked pavs flow better, but he had a shaky attempt with the peek-a-boo line. In a close 10 line battle, that makes a difference. enough to give my vote to Sharp Vote-Sharp