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Old 07-13-2014, 02:32 AM   #36
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well i typed this up already so i'm going to just put it here...
@timeless - man. i really liked this piece. reeeal sick. you pulled the dream intro off really well, im not hating on the space it took up.. didnt feel it was wasted at all. this was dope.
They got Jesus too, heard he got some freakish moves.
lol. you got some sick flow bro. really. but i didn't get this line..
turns out that the devil's blood is miraculously white.
? anyway, the card game was a little vague. then you really went off on a tangent. i have no idea what you're talking about. but i liked it. i liked it enough to not care what you were actually talking about. it was dope.
favorite set..
Zoom in on the eyes of destruction as I describe this
event I was not on time with. Nor did I cosign it.
I designed it with intent to reach the sky with.
Now climb in and take a ride with me as I rewind bliss : ...

cosign it, reach the sky with. that sounded great. enjoyed the rhymes in this set very much as well..

Wrong. Your whole solution is criminally insane, deranged.
That explains the world today in vein, pain is not tamed to behave.
@Vividlyvague - felt like a freewrite to me. enjoyed it though. favorite section..
Am I too old to grasp this passion to pass it to my hatching offspring? No idea, but this is plaguing me and that's the problem. Puppets of destiny with frayed cables in my subconscious are begging reanimation... procrastination rears it's noggin.
catchiest lines..
I'm feeble yet great, feeding to fates that are less awesome. I need to be vague.
that was dope as fuck. i like how you still hit the topic with a "i'm dope" drop. well, "i'm vv" anyways. pretty clean bro. really liked it.
/v timeless took it by a significant margin. much more complete, well rounded.
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