Greed vs. BROKE LESNAR {BROKE LESNAR wins 12-0}

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-07-2014, 05:21 PM

The 1-2 Punch League
Season 1

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@Greed @BROKE LESNAR

BROKE LESNAR · 07-07-2014, 05:44 PM

Check, gl.

Greed · 07-08-2014, 01:47 AM

Yeah

BROKE LESNAR · 07-08-2014, 06:26 PM

Greed/Pryde

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed/Pryde

Name change:

Wrath

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

@Greed, someone already has @WRATH.

7 Deadly Sins:

Pride
Greed
Sloth
Envy
Lust
Gluttony
Wrath

I'll renounce these sins & pander to the Catholic vote
so he can take Pryde n' Greed but this harmless faggot will never bring the Wrath to BROKE

Greed · 07-11-2014, 06:00 AM

Oh child, dont blame god for that cold pile
If He broke 'the mold' we only referring to your old style

El Muffin · 07-11-2014, 06:14 AM

Is there more to greed`s punch?

I mean I think I get it..but I have a slight assumption that im missing something..

If im not ..this is easy..greeds punch was pretty underwhelming

I like brokes more..decent nameplay

V/broke

Will edit if I have a moment of clarity

Blanco Bishop · 07-11-2014, 07:03 PM

I'm trying to dig into greeds bar.

Can't find anything.

Not bad but broke took it with rhyme scheme, wp, np, n imagery.

V broke

Greed · 07-11-2014, 07:27 PM

God broke the mold / broke is mold double meaning. Broke 'The Mold' Lesnar

I was avoiding a wordy line.

jilti · 07-11-2014, 08:03 PM

Lliked both but gotta give it to Broke for creativity and detail he put into it

Mike Wrecka · 07-11-2014, 09:53 PM

Broke got it

Greed · 07-11-2014, 10:05 PM

Bullshit.

Adonis · 07-11-2014, 11:06 PM

I preferred the name play diss and concept behind it of broke over a slight jab.

Sharp · 07-12-2014, 02:20 PM

liked broke's idea more.

v/broke

KnowP · 07-12-2014, 10:39 PM

Greed punch was way too easy/predictable. Broke punch was decent. definitely did some research for it, but it landed nonetheless.

v.broke

Malachi · 07-13-2014, 01:32 AM

V/broke

I like the way he worked wit the nameplay. Greed was simple so i wasnt sure if there was more to it or not lol

Greed · 07-13-2014, 02:47 AM

Simple huh. I used a idiom as misdirection and niggas just lost the line all together.

El Muffin · 07-13-2014, 02:55 AM

Idiom or not.

That shit was weak, hence why I didnt edit even after the expo

Js no hate

Greed · 07-13-2014, 03:07 AM

You didnt get it bitch if anything me having to explain it lost this.

King Ra. · 07-13-2014, 11:43 AM

This was closer imo. While I was feeling the nameplay & personal shot by Broke, the punchline hit more like a slight jab with the braggadocio type feel it landed with. Didn't like all the build up before the bar, didn't need all of that, honestly. Greed's bar was straight to the point. The 'broke the mold' was a nice attempt, but I feel you could have done more to make the punch sting.

MVGT: Broke Lesnar. Good job by both competitors.

Window Taco · 07-13-2014, 01:01 PM

Sick punch by Lesnar intertwined with a personal that was Well set up, playing on the religious concept. Greed had a worthy line but it just didn't move on Broke's shit enough to derail it, concept needed to be a bit fresher to damage it IMO.

V/ Lesnar

07-07-2014, 05:21 PM	#1
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	Greed vs. BROKE LESNAR {BROKE LESNAR wins 12-0} The 1-2 Punch League Season 1 All rules are posted in a stickied thread in this forum. Go check before doing anything. You MUST CHECK IN within 48 hours of the battle being started. @Greed @BROKE LESNAR

07-11-2014, 06:14 AM	#6
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Is there more to greed`s punch? I mean I think I get it..but I have a slight assumption that im missing something.. If im not ..this is easy..greeds punch was pretty underwhelming I like brokes more..decent nameplay V/broke Will edit if I have a moment of clarity __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 07-11-2014 at 06:20 AM.

07-11-2014, 07:27 PM	#8
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	God broke the mold / broke is mold double meaning. Broke 'The Mold' Lesnar I was avoiding a wordy line. Last edited by Greed; 07-11-2014 at 07:33 PM.

07-11-2014, 09:53 PM	#10
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Broke got it __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

07-11-2014, 11:06 PM	#12
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	I preferred the name play diss and concept behind it of broke over a slight jab. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-07-2014, 05:44 PM	#2
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Check, gl.

07-08-2014, 01:47 AM	#3
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Yeah

07-11-2014, 06:00 AM	#5
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Oh child, dont blame god for that cold pile If He broke 'the mold' we only referring to your old style

07-11-2014, 07:03 PM	#7
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	I'm trying to dig into greeds bar. Can't find anything. Not bad but broke took it with rhyme scheme, wp, np, n imagery. V broke

07-11-2014, 08:03 PM	#9
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	Lliked both but gotta give it to Broke for creativity and detail he put into it

07-11-2014, 10:05 PM	#11
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Bullshit.

07-12-2014, 10:39 PM	#14
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 222 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463488	Greed punch was way too easy/predictable. Broke punch was decent. definitely did some research for it, but it landed nonetheless. v.broke

07-13-2014, 01:32 AM	#15
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,529 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877410	V/broke I like the way he worked wit the nameplay. Greed was simple so i wasnt sure if there was more to it or not lol __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-13-2014, 02:47 AM	#16
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Simple huh. I used a idiom as misdirection and niggas just lost the line all together.

07-13-2014, 02:55 AM	#17
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Idiom or not. That shit was weak, hence why I didnt edit even after the expo Js no hate __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

07-13-2014, 03:07 AM	#18
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	You didnt get it bitch if anything me having to explain it lost this.

07-13-2014, 11:43 AM	#19
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	This was closer imo. While I was feeling the nameplay & personal shot by Broke, the punchline hit more like a slight jab with the braggadocio type feel it landed with. Didn't like all the build up before the bar, didn't need all of that, honestly. Greed's bar was straight to the point. The 'broke the mold' was a nice attempt, but I feel you could have done more to make the punch sting. MVGT: Broke Lesnar. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

07-13-2014, 01:01 PM	#20
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888974	Sick punch by Lesnar intertwined with a personal that was Well set up, playing on the religious concept. Greed had a worthy line but it just didn't move on Broke's shit enough to derail it, concept needed to be a bit fresher to damage it IMO. V/ Lesnar __________________ aka windu tuako

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