Sharp Nine [VS] pav [Sharp Nine WINS]

[Paradigm]

The Summer Classic VII
Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament

@Sharp Nine @pav
Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due MONDAY,
  July 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Check Ins are due FRIDAY, July 11th 2014
• Voting ends Friday July 18th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours
• You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• Limit MUST be agreed upon

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will be disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Sharp]

alright, 10?

[pav]

aight

[pav]

The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear
with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
.. I dont see no real emcee, I just see an imposture
Cuz with battles – u stay ducking and slipping.. ur like a peek-a-boo boxer
But me? Im a vet killer aka the head splitter
U a giant? Well consider this Jack Dempsey vs Jess Willard
.. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit
I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..
Honestly.. ur prolly gay with a man who u put in mad work to please
and have hitting bareback.. like Schwarzenegger playin Hercules

[Sharp]

Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win
aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn
Plus you could only win with your old pals, now you're prolly boned
my man you've had more obvious joint rides than Fig driving stoned
I've had close calls with legends. your bitch ass can't be talking
if those were toss ups.. this is a jump ball between Chris Bosh n Steven Hawking
Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook
A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame
Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by pav

The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear
with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
.. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit
I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..

Originally Posted by Sharp

Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win
aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn
Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook
A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame
Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame

I included Sharp's opener bc even though the wording really could have benefited from some more thought, I liked the concept. I have it 3-2 Sharp. pav seems to be somewhat new and could use some improvement. Better formulation of his bars and such. That Paradigm line was probably my lotb.

v-Sharp

3-2

[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by pav

The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear
with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
Solid, ok.
.. I dont see no real emcee, I just see an imposture (imposter)
Cuz with battles – u stay ducking and slipping.. ur like a peek-a-boo boxer
ehh weak
But me? Im a vet killer aka the head splitter
U a giant? Well consider this Jack Dempsey vs Jess Willard
weak statement
.. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit
I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..
... PARA NAMEPLAYS ARE ALL VIRTUALLY PLAYED ESPECIALLY ONES LIKE THIS
Honestly.. ur prolly gay with a man who u put in mad work to please
and have hitting bareback.. like Schwarzenegger playin Hercules
nah weak

Originally Posted by Sharp

Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win
aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn
Nice, good wording.
Plus you could only win with your old pals, now you're prolly boned
my man you've had more obvious joint rides than Fig driving stoned
lol, good
I've had close calls with legends. your bitch ass can't be talking
if those were toss ups.. this is a jump ball between Chris Bosh n Steven Hawking
nah weak and connection is soft
Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook
A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
played kinda... not feeling
But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame
Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame
Nice

Pav you seem rusty but no worries it will come back to you. I can tell you're oldschool. Sharp had some pretty good bars and was more consistent and creative here. Solid verse I think it's the first time really reading anything from you.

Vote - Sharp

[Blanco Bishop]

Padded, para (maybe)
Vs
Jumpball, messi

Thought sharp was cleaner with his delivery n had the comedy factor. Pav sounded a lil dated n lacked a little more hmph in the punches.

Vote sharp.

[Dominate]

Padded was good. Digm would've been good except that np has been done a lot on Para. Boxer was bad, corny, other 2 were OK

Messi and jump ball were good, other 3 all cool/OK - creative but not heavy hitting

V/ Sharp

[Orc]

i think pav won. sharp has a more nc friendly style but pav had an oldschool rm feel to it which i dug. liked his way of wording things too. padded was ok so was digm. sharp gaza and messi were good attempts but ive seen both a lot. tony gwynn was nice. i just think pav had a fresher approach personally and edges it out. vote pav.

I have to agree w/ Orc here. I liked pav's wording and concepts better then I liked sharps. I've seen messi done like 5 times recently on RB. But the executions on the rest of those plays weren't up to there potential, IMO. I really liked padded, seen a few as well as used straight jacket plays but that one was combined with the padded which I felt made it pretty fresh. Peek a boo boxer was mediocre and the paradigm at was cool. Sharp had that messi bar which I've seen recently a lot but was cool.

V/Pav

[jilti]

Pav..

The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear
with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
really liked the wording and flow of this bar, good hit
.. I dont see no real emcee, I just see an imposture
Cuz with battles – u stay ducking and slipping.. ur like a peek-a-boo boxer
nice setup, coulda worded the punch wayyy better though. Seen where u were going with this especially with the very next bar containing boxers names, and i liked the ducking and slipping tie in. However, the wording wasnt good at the end and felt cheesy
But me? Im a vet killer aka the head splitter
U a giant? Well consider this Jack Dempsey vs Jess Willard
dope multis, solid punch
.. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit
I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..
seen the para-dime concept used before but it was still cool
Honestly.. ur prolly gay with a man who u put in mad work to please
and have hitting bareback.. like Schwarzenegger playin Hercules
decent closer here

Sharp..

Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win
aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn
lol good line
Plus you could only win with your old pals, now you're prolly boned
my man you've had more obvious joint rides than Fig driving stoned
ok
I've had close calls with legends. your bitch ass can't be talking
if those were toss ups.. this is a jump ball between Chris Bosh n Steven Hawking
bragging about close calls instead of actual wins?? w/e cool line nonetheless
Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook
A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
seen this concept used before, but it was still decent
But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame
Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame
lol nice closer


I enjoyed reading pavs verse more. Sharp had some bland punches mixed with good ones and was consistent with no discernible bad ones. i liked pavs flow better, but he had a shaky attempt with the peek-a-boo line. In a close 10 line battle, that makes a difference. enough to give my vote to Sharp

Vote-Sharp

[Kin]

Pav-

with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
Dope shit

I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..
That really stuck out to me....Fire

overall verse read smooth as Hell...some nice hittin' lines

Sharp-

A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
haha...like that

ya verse wasn't as smooth of a read to me...a lil' choppy wit' the flow but your punches were a lil' more complex...but at tha same time they mostly related to people...woulda liked to see a lil' more variety in ways you were throwin' tha punches...That woulda made u edge it out in my book

But the consistency of Pav held it down for me...and some Nice solid punches I was diggin'

Vote- PAV

[Sho Money EMG]

pav
The summer classic is here and ur one of the wackest, I swear
with a record so padded, I bet there's a man wearing a straight jacket in there
okay opener
.. I dont see no real emcee, I just see an imposture
Cuz with battles – u stay ducking and slipping.. ur like a peek-a-boo boxer
lol alright
But me? Im a vet killer aka the head splitter
U a giant? Well consider this Jack Dempsey vs Jess Willard
nice
.. Ur a sad mawfucka.. with a brain on some other shit
I bet the only digm you ever talked to has para in front of it..
alil forced, but okay
Honestly.. ur prolly gay with a man who u put in mad work to please
and have hitting bareback.. like Schwarzenegger playin Hercules
decent

sharp
Dude stopped being good in 04. no way we'll see this phony win
aint had a hit in 10 yrs n hes dying slow, its making me miss Tony Gywnn
okay
Plus you could only win with your old pals, now you're prolly boned
my man you've had more obvious joint rides than Fig driving stoned
lol nice
I've had close calls with legends. your bitch ass can't be talking
if those were toss ups.. this is a jump ball between Chris Bosh n Steven Hawking
alright
Gave your girl a crazy dicking. I promise you that babe's shook
A slightly more Messi finish her pussy coulda been an Argentine soccer playbook
dope
But ur rapist ass cant bag girls anyway. that's gotta be lame
Your best shot of bangin a chick is a violent strip that would put Gaza to shame
ill

sharp def elevated. good battle but sharp got it

mvgt - sharp

[Malachi]

Pav:
Only really liked the digm line tbh
the opener was ight

Sharp:

The opener was coo
Messi was dope.
Chris bosh hawking was ight

V/ sharp, thought he came better wit the punches. Especially the Messi line which made him win to me .

[Paradigm]

6-3 Sharp

[Allen Knight]

Opener

Vs

Opener, driving stoned, violent strip


V/sharp, pav wasnt bad at all just didn't have a consistent verse u can tell he rusty but
He prolly was dope, sharp had a good showing real solid verse , driving stoned was dope an lotb
Props yahll.

[Paradigm]

Sharp Nine wins 9-3 and advances to the next round.