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07-01-2014, 07:40 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 8,898
Battle Record: 27-22
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Zen.
Cut the filler. And randomness. You aren't dull. Some good bits. Ra. Don't write about yourself like a cosmic god, so trite & unapproachable. Decent rhythm. Had Zen.
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