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06-11-2014, 02:57 PM
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Arm the Homeless
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I liked this. There was a sense of despair throughout that felt real and struck a chord with me as I've been through similar situations of detoxing from pills on my own. It's not very fun. As for the lyricism, I've seen better from you, but I understand this wasn't meant to be a lyrical showcase and more of a vent. I dig it.
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