Week 15: Zenland (1-2) vs. King Ra. (6-6) \\ Zenland wins 5-2

Adonis · 06-07-2014, 02:36 AM

A very emotional and touching tale, vs. A God's wrath. In the end, I think this will be a very close battle and voter preference will prevail, because mechanically, neither tips the scale.Jah had a very short verse, you both did, but while I wanted more from Jah, more from zen could have been a bad thing. The emotion was strong in zens verse as I said. You made me think of dying, that happy picture painted falsely, I'd never pondered that. Kudos to you. Jah, you had typical fashion, but stereotypical execution. You let off the gas, maybe letting fag baby in your mind in thinking you didn't have to go all out. But what zen posted is rather dope, he gave me a strong connection to a character and made me think.

Voting zen

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06-07-2014, 02:36 AM	#3
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	A very emotional and touching tale, vs. A God's wrath. In the end, I think this will be a very close battle and voter preference will prevail, because mechanically, neither tips the scale.Jah had a very short verse, you both did, but while I wanted more from Jah, more from zen could have been a bad thing. The emotion was strong in zens verse as I said. You made me think of dying, that happy picture painted falsely, I'd never pondered that. Kudos to you. Jah, you had typical fashion, but stereotypical execution. You let off the gas, maybe letting fag baby in your mind in thinking you didn't have to go all out. But what zen posted is rather dope, he gave me a strong connection to a character and made me think. Voting zen