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05-24-2014, 11:59 AM
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Arm the Homeless
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This was very cool. I didn't like how some of the rhymes didnt match up perfectly but the story was rad. I imagined is a family driving cross country after the apocalypse or something. Probably not what you were going for, but it works. Cool stuff.
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