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Old 05-07-2014, 06:58 AM   #10
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Death rap indeed. The sprinkle of gunplay meshed with horrorcore like finesse and some real heavy concepts of swaggacious proportions really made this a refreshing but ill read. The build up in the beginning was very calculated and propelled this piece when you began to throw the haymakers. Each line seemed to compliment each other, strung together very precision like. It's hard to single out favorite lines because everything was just smooth. What's funny is, when I first started reading, I was like, "is Beretta really dropping a topical like piece?" on some gothic, dark, dull boy type depression shit. But then that transition kicked in and I thought, yeah, he on his shit. This was cool. Impressed. Best drop of the month thus far. Good ff.
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