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05-05-2014, 11:28 AM
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Aesth verse was good but wasn't great. Felt that the content had potential but was delivered shallowly with little construction. The rhyme scheme wasn't special and I felt the flow choppy in places.
Splits felt natural, utilized a more impressive vocab and flowed nicely and uniquely. Sometimes less is more. Vote Split
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